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    dots Submission Name: The bloody white flowerdots
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    Author: Kykaru
    ASL Info:    18/Female/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 4/3/4
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsThe bloody white flowerdots
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    There once was a flower,
    so different,
    so pure.
    The white petals all flooded with the blood of the inquierer,
    and the red roses engulfing it, all spilled with tears.
    The one who spilled onto the flower, was the one with shining knife.
    And as the tears fled down the stem, they lost their touch and failed.




    Submitted on 2009-07-16 18:38:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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