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Author: lainie75
ASL Info:    30/f/uk
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Words: 165
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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havnt wrote anything in ages , my friend inspired this as she has had the most terrible 2 years but still she fights with a strength i've never seen , i hope that if i ever go through the heartache she has i will b able 2 have just a little of her strength xxx


How much can i put up with
How can i , just go on
Again you've broke my heart today
my life is just so wrong

Everytime i fix it
Everytime i try
Everytime i sort it out
You pile my burdens high

Another day i've got through
Another night has past
The tears just keep on falling
The heartache seems to last

But still i keep on fighting
With a strength that is unknown
I dont know where it comes from
I just try to carry on

I get up and keep going
Even though i dont want to
I know that they will need me
To help to get them though

So please god if your listening
Up above me way so high
I'll keep fighting what is thrown at me
Untill the day i die

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