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    dots Submission Name: Ahoydots
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    Author: marcusbrody
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    Words: 38
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAhoydots
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    A tiny stream
    Captain sailing
    on a boat made of papier mache.
    Takes me back to the day
    when my vessel was quayed
    until all of the contraband could be crated away




    Submitted on 2009-07-17 06:03:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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