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    dots Submission Name: random thoughts when thinking of lovedots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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    dotsrandom thoughts when thinking of lovedots
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    with every touch my skin feels like its on fire and i begin to crave more and more

    every sound she makes and when she says my name its like i get lost in every word falling deeper and deeper into everything she says and does

    and when she looks at me it feels like im falling and lost into her eyes and i could just stay there laying in her arms being happy while were close to each other we become one with each other and everything we do isn't thought about its just done





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