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    dots Submission Name: "It's whatever..."dots
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    Author: MyWorld
    ASL Info:    21/M/IN
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 76/99/87
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dots"It's whatever..."dots
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    I'm honestly not masochistic
    That's probably why I'm endin' it
    Like I'm apocalyptic
    And, not to be cryptic
    But, this shit I quit?
    Ain't worth bein' optimistic
    'Cause I know what's up
    Ya got a tough front?
    I got a tough back
    From all the fuckin' stabbin
    What's happenin'
    Is I'm done wantin'
    So, I'm comin' up crackin' heads
    I'm back and less
    You back me with blessings
    I'm attackin' 'n' you wanna hack it?
    Better react with your best




    Submitted on 2009-07-18 03:37:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very rap-esque, and very angry. I like how you managed the front/back thing...

    Carrie
    | Posted on 2009-07-26 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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