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Only Your Enemies Leave Roses

Author: Flowerinbloom
ASL Info:    22/M/Earth (I think)
Elite Ratio:    3.5 - 700 /559 /123
Words: 105
Class/Type: Poetry /
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Don't really like it much but just playing around with different things havent been able to really write anything for a while now ehh so it goes i guess.

Only Your Enemies Leave Roses

they adorn your tombstone
with petals of red
reveling in your death
wishing they dealt the killing blow

only your enemies leave roses

time moves so slow
since you gave your last breath
your crimson wounds bled
but now you sleep alone

only your enemies leave roses

they mourn at your grave
with souls draped in black
red roses clutched to their bosoms
tears holding back the laughter

only your enemies leave roses

will you forgive them after
the ghouls and the phantoms
your tombstone is cracked
at the hands of the depraved

only your enemies leave roses

Submitted on 2009-07-19 12:57:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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