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    dots Submission Name: To long...dots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    23/F/WV!!
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 1001/1073/242
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 439



    Description:
       I tried. lol didn't work so well, guess the poetry ship has sailed :(


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    dotsTo long...dots
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    Green mist
    Shadowed trail,
    Dew dripping from the leaves.
    So long since I've written,
    I'm hoping nature will inspire me.
    Foggy mountain landscapes
    Inclined rocky hills
    I don't know anyone
    Who'd enjoy this mental swill.
    Trying so hard to recapture
    The images my words once evoked
    Coming up with nothing
    but memories of mirrors and smoke.




    Submitted on 2009-07-22 07:48:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I actually like it. When I feel blocked, I can never even produce something satisfactory enough for me to feel okay about posting it. And, you actually managed a decent piece about the blocked feeling itself. My advice is to keep trying. If it doesn't come back, at least you gave it your best shot. But, maybe you just need the right inspiration.. I have no idea what it could be, but, maybe...
    | Posted on 2009-07-30 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]
      How sad, Maybe it'll come back...
    It wasn't a god-awful poem, like some I've seen here, and their writers think that the amazingly rock...lol!


    Carrie
    | Posted on 2009-07-24 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]


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