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    dots Submission Name: Shanes TRUTH in his word (after 20 years)dots

    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
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    dotsShanes TRUTH in his word (after 20 years)dots

    be carefull grass isnt always greener,
    and thanks for hearing me out Im a wreck and my life is a wreck
    which isnt to unusual for me.Because of giddings state school Im a pretty stearn and rugged sometimes dangerous person
    & thats not who I want to be,
    I have to work hard at not bieng hard on myself and others when I feel like Im being attacked verbaly
    or physacly I go into offence mode and I wont back down no matter what the damage
    so I dont socialize with people unless I have to.
    I live a lonely life by my choice and I havent known love yet not sure Im capable.
    I married kisha because i got her pregnant and
    I wanted to be responsible for Devian and didnt want him to suffer as I did.
    But I was never in love with kish but always tried to make her as happy as I could
    and provide for her and Dev but
    I could never be as affectionate as she needed me to be,to her Im a cold hearted person and to me she is a nuisance.but I do care...

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