wow i like this post I feel you speak the truth, and for those who do not believe or are unsure with what they believe. These people automatically believe when they are dying, on their death bed asking for forgiveness asking for mercy hoping to see heavens gates rather than satin's chambers. This I hate, for people to live life one way (same as they always have) and then change knowing they are dying it disgusts me... Great post
Ummm. No if someone truly believes in God, and does everything they can and are supposed to, they empty their plates for the others. They aren't supposed to live their only life in sin or they don't get into heaven. But this poem is good for the "supposed" believers, who say they believe but are just trying to get the benefits.
But it is well written.