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I will remember

Author: sparkleshine
Elite Ratio:    0.86 - 27 /19 /13
Words: 32
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I will remember

No matter what happens I will remeber you
I will remeber the fun we had together
I will remeber the secrets told
I will remeber the trust
I will remeber our friendship

Submitted on 2009-07-22 13:25:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Very meaningful and your word choice is very good.

Check your spelling......remember.

| Posted on 2009-07-25 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]

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