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    dots Submission Name: Good-Byedots
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    Author: anberlin
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 130
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 737
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 734



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    dotsGood-Byedots
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    May i put my hand on the wound for you and apply preasure? Or would you rather be alone, in your final hour?
    ("Oh, Oh, Oh")
    "No, No, Please dont go"
    They believe my to be a monster, shot to kill, ask questions after.
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    Telling my story, alone in the cell. Who said i wanted to live this hell? ("Oh, Oh, Oh")
    "No, No, Please dont go"
    -----
    "You shot me, thinking i was the bad guy"
    Thats right, and now you will die. ("Oh, Oh, Oh")
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    Now my storys, comeing to an end, my eyes closeing, Thought i loved you my friend...
    ("Oh, Oh, Oh")
    ...Goodbye.




    Submitted on 2009-07-23 16:02:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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