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when u can think of nothing....please think of me

Author: SpoonieD
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A bit lovy......

when u can think of nothing....please think of me

Everybody wants u...... so why would u want me?
So when u can think of nothing...........
Please think of me.
When all the wonderous possibilities in this world illude ur mind.......
And every one else has run out of thier time
Please think of me.
When your amazing view states to fade.
And there are no better offers made......
Please think of me.
Company has stupidly left...... and you have no more best.
All I ask is 4 a thought after the rest.
Please think of me.
All I have is nothing when I try to think what i have that u need.
All I have is a book written the ramble of admiration... for u to read.
Please..... think of me
If plans fail.....and your left with a scense of doubt.
Or your ever lost, with no memory of those over me about
Please think of me.
I dont deserve ur first thought for the day..... but am happy to be somewhere after the last.
After all those people u want and wanted....future, present or past
When u can think of nothing...... please think of me.

Writers note: Just to exist as a thought in the world of u..... Is all I ask.

Submitted on 2009-07-23 23:25:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is beautiful. Pretty sad, but nonetheless beautiful. I've been there and it's even more sad how big of a deal that thought can be when it's of you. The littlest tiny things have made my days.
| Posted on 2009-07-25 00:00:00 | by MyWorld | [ Reply to This ]

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