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    dots Submission Name: Imprisonment Within Gracedots
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    Author: 3L3m3ntal
    ASL Info:    18/M/Arizona
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 2/5/7
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 44
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       Yes, sadly, I've done some things in which I'm killing myself over. But this isn't just for that. Its also a dedication to someone... Close to me persae


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    dotsImprisonment Within Gracedots
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    Strike him not dead,
    For he knows not what he hath done.
    Feed him the poison slow,
    So he may be shown the actions.
    Give no consequence with words,
    The fire of Action is all the more bitter.
    Treat him not with hate,
    For he shall feel accepted.
    Feed him love in the poison he knows,
    For the one he stands out to,
    Shows him the blinding light,
    Gives the sword that hangs loosely.
    Treat a man naught with life,
    Treat him with grace,
    For that grace is the greatest torture.
    For when he falls,
    Will Death embrace his final call.




    Submitted on 2009-07-24 16:34:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is juicy if that makes sense!? you make the post come alive, your wording on it is superb, am fascinated by this write kudos

    Jackz
    | Posted on 2009-07-26 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]



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