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    dots Submission Name: look on the bright side... suicide dots
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    Author: Bloodstone
    ASL Info:    25 / m / OH
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 44/95/90
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotslook on the bright side... suicide dots
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    this time i will, this time i wont wait
    alone, and alone i will be
    crazy, not beautiful, just crazy
    is that why hope keeps me in the dark?

    i feel so hopeless, you broke my heart
    he killed my spirit
    nothing left to do but die
    trust has let me sleep with death
    and i never felt better
    because i always let myself down

    my childhood was full of broken promises
    i tried to look up
    but there were no blessed opening
    being molested took my innocence away
    and from that it rains in my head everyday

    i'm not happy and theses seeds
    are planted deep
    and they grow with every tear i drop
    this time im going to make a differents
    alone, and alone i will be.




    Submitted on 2009-07-24 18:08:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your sadness I feel so deeply. Please keep writing it is therapeutic, trust me on that one, others will find strength in your words. Your pain is very clear, those who caused you pain are to blame, NOT YOU! They are not worthy of your love. Remember everything happens for a reason, even when it is unclear how this could be. You will find happiness, you must remain strong! You have a gift, writing, and I believe you can help others that may have had the same unfortunate experiences, your words will mean so much and will help many to begin to heal. I know it is hard to see, there are good people in the world, keep an open mind. Please continue to write, for yourself. Please allow yourself to heal, you can and will be able to, time can heal all wounds. Keep on writing.
    | Posted on 2009-07-29 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]



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