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    dots Submission Name: Take A Deep Breathe and Start Walkingdots
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    Author: autumnflame
    ASL Info:    21/F/FL
    Elite Ratio:    5.53 - 15/10/5
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 50
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       we're over.

    quote is from lord of the rings for your info.


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    dotsTake A Deep Breathe and Start Walkingdots
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    Letting go was never a strong point of mine
    But let's face it, I have to.
    You left me so coldly and without a second thought
    As you walked out the door
    To the floor my heart dropped

    I do not know if I will ever see you again
    Our paths may never cross
    It's strange to me how you can plan your life
    And dream up dreams
    And in one instant, they disappear.

    My eyes are tired from crying
    My body is weak from my own self-abuse
    And while you're out there flirting with your women
    I'm left here alone.
    Marriage is supposed to last forever.

    "How do you pick up the threads of an old life?
    How do you go on...
    While in your heart you begin to understand
    There is no going back?"
    I have no answers.

    But I must stand and be strong
    I must hold my head high
    For this is the only way I will be able to survive.
    I will now take one last look around
    At the life we once had and realize

    It's time to take a deep breathe and start walking.




    Submitted on 2009-07-25 11:43:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      very deep, very raw, and very exspressent. You did great on tapping in the true emotions which weave into this peice of writing perfectly. The feelings of a spouse leaving you, the feeling being over whelming, I esspecialy appreciated the rawness of the line "My eyes are tired from crying
    My body is weak from my own self-abuse"
    | Posted on 2009-07-26 00:00:00 | by grimmreaper | [ Reply to This ]



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