Journey Of The Night by Frank Maguire

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Author:	Frank Maguire
ASL Info:	52 / UK
Elite Ratio:	2.26 - 1727/1248/246
Words:	149

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nature
Total Views:	71
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Journey Of The Night dots

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The midnight hour has come and gone
Darkness rules where sun once shone
Morning waits to greet the dawn
Through the journey of the night

Flowers sleep with heads bowed low
Leaves, they rustle to and fro
The westward wind begins to blow
Through the journey of the night

Silence sweeps the dale and lea
Birds are resting in the tree
Children sleep contentedly
Through the journey of the night

Owl hunts with stealth and guile
Foxes roam for many a mile
Death is in the air awhile
Through the journey of the night

Darkness starts to fade away
Blackened skies now turn to grey
The sun begins to make its way
Through the journey of the night

Morning breaks as dawn is spun
Sky is blue beneath the sun
But darkness, soon, it will return
Through the journey of the night

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  This writing so vivid I can close my eyes and I see and feel the Journey of the Night.
I like it a lot

Keep on writing
| Posted on 2009-10-10 00:00:00 | by Dawnyd | [ Reply to This ]
  I love this poem mostly because I can see you in it. Sitting somewhere outside in the dark, contemplating life- pen and notebook in hand. I can see you pausing and glancing up at the woods, staring at the stars, chewing on a pen cap...
| Posted on 2009-09-17 00:00:00 | by The Conqueror | [ Reply to This ]
  This is outstanding! The night represents a different world, a different mood, a transcendence all its own! This reads like a classic, and I really like it!

Bravo!
| Posted on 2009-07-30 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  It reminds me of endless rainbow circles of prussian blues.... night time is so eerily painted, isn't it? Even the stars seem too bright and unreal. This is really a beautiful piece, and it made me smile.
| Posted on 2009-07-27 00:00:00 | by grey_girl | [ Reply to This ]

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