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    dots Submission Name: Titandots
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    Author: akaietowa-ru_18
    ASL Info:    20/F/Belly of the Beast
    Elite Ratio:    3.68 - 101/125/64
    Words: 168
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 689
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1129



    Description:
       I currently just separated from my father, he's in another country, and while I'm currently happy in my new home with my mother, I do miss him, no matter how much he hurt me and ultimately destroyed our family. I do love him no matter who or what he is. This is dedicated to the man who's loved me from birth.


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    dotsTitandots
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    Titans were these gigantic figures in myth.
    They seemed unbeatable,
    Strong as they were capable,
    And as human as any human.

    I know a titan, a great titan
    The greatest of them all.
    Stronger than superman,
    Bigger than a mountain,
    And he knows no fear.

    Wrestle him and see, he wont be beat,
    Stand on your tip-toes, he wont shrink,
    Say boo, he wont scream.

    He loves me, this titan,
    Loves me so much.
    Ive known him all my life.

    Got a secret though,
    Hes a real softy.

    Writes me poems he does,
    Gives me hugs and kisses,
    Calls me his little princess,
    And hes my Knight-In-Shining-Armor
    And sometimes a stand-in Prince Charming.

    Titans are myths,
    But he aint,
    How can he be?
    Hes the real deal,
    Hes the legendary Atlas,
    But I dont call him that.

    I gave this titan a special name,
    A name that only I can call him.
    I call him Daddy,
    my titan of a father.




    Submitted on 2009-07-25 19:29:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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