Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
    • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
    • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Leave my pastdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: cor
    ASL Info:    16/M/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.28 - 28/24/30
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/I hate you
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 710



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsLeave my pastdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I will venture further
    to disappear into this forest
    To embrace my wanderlust
    Ill just never stop

    Theres nothing to hold me back
    Theres nothing to keep me here
    Whats there left to do
    Whats there left to finish

    Why should i follow their words
    Why should i follow their actions
    They say things they believe
    They say things they trust

    No more shall I follow lies
    No more shall I follow fools
    I shall begin my life
    I shall begin my dreams

    I can do all i wish
    I can do all i hope for

    All my battles are already won
    But the war has just begun!




    Submitted on 2009-07-25 23:24:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      strong spoken, well detailed, I can see the story, good poem, well written
    | Posted on 2009-07-31 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?    		7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    176887



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry