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Our Stars

Author: Dawnyd
Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 149 /80 /32
Words: 42
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Personal thoughts about love.

Our Stars

Open your eyes and look to the skies

Don't waste your time living a lie

Let our love lift us high

Together we'll grab the stars

Right out of the sky

Submitted on 2009-07-26 12:31:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Looks like you have found your soulmate and there is union of souls, dreams and desires. Very sweet poem about immaculate love.
| Posted on 2009-07-26 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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