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    dots Submission Name: My poem dots

    Author: mypaperheart
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Gothic
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    dotsMy poem dots

    Her hair as brown as the fresh mud that covers her shoes...
    Her eyes as dark as night...
    Far into the trees she runs...
    The trees that cover her veiw of the moons pale face...
    The male silouette in the shadows...
    The gunshot that echoes and seems to freeze the world for a single second...
    Her body lays deep beneath the reeds of the still lake...
    Until she is found she will cease to exist...

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