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    dots Submission Name: The Gift of Freedomdots
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    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 48
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Serious
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    dotsThe Gift of Freedomdots
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    Freedom is indeed a gift from God. For if the choice of freedom was left solely in the hands of men, only those who held the reins of power would grant it to those souls indebted to them, which is not freedom at all.


    The Gadfly




    Submitted on 2009-07-28 07:19:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      God gave us the gift of Free Will.
    He left us with a Choice.
    The Choice comes with a Price.
    For God does not play Dice.

    What is freedom anyway? Freedom is Joy, being able to live above what you have been given. Freedom is not to be found in life, but beyond it.

    Soul-hugger
    | Posted on 2009-09-03 00:00:00 | by Soul-Hugger | [ Reply to This ]
      That is so true! Wow! Short sweet and to the point! I love it!
    I love My creator in Heaven and am greatful he gave me the choice of freedom and to live in A free country and live life on lifes terms with his help,

    Thankyou so much for this poem I hope to read more of your poetry.

    totojane03
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]


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