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my loving you ...

Author: magnicat
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Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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this is a simple love poem for my sweetest girl, Carol Ann.. i love you so very much..

my loving you ...

my loving you is like a running stream,
never the same in one place
on any given day

rocks of natural beauty are smoothed
by the water, sharp edges
gone forever
stones are overturned,
removing stumbling blocks
to reveal the wonders beneath
just for you and me

my loving you is like the beacon
of a lighthouse,
knowing in my soul
that i have a place in your heart,
a home in your life
and your home in my heart

my loving you is being the best we can be
each as her own, seperately
and together so strong
each day a ground-breaking discovery
of more love,
beauty surrounding us

every day a new way to express
the most precious of all

our love

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