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    dots Submission Name: neverdots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 35
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       it just came to me.


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    dotsneverdots
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    my love,
    im slipping,
    deeper,
    deeper,
    the darkness grabbing at me,
    stronger and stronger by the minute,
    pulling me into the dark abyss,
    the farther i go,
    the more i realize,
    you never cared.




    Submitted on 2009-07-29 13:20:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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