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    dots Submission Name: Quick Limedots
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    Author: Yemassee1
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1/0/1
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
    Total Views: 36
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Just a poem about a sudden revelation.


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    dotsQuick Limedots
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    A jolt that set a heart to beat
    as never one before,
    that felt to reach beyond a chest
    where hopefulness ignored.

    And truth then fell, a weighted stone
    that burst, deflating time,
    shattered into many shards,
    then buried beneath the lime.




    Submitted on 2009-07-29 13:43:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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