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Young Love

Author: Dawnyd
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Words: 66
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This was written for my son and his beautiful wife, whom I love very much, they just celebrated their second wedding anniversary.

Young Love

A beautiful young couple brought together

With love and perseverance they'll stand through the

stormy weather

Their love strong and true

When forced apart they are sad and blue

Together they walk the line

Together they will withstand the sands of time

The sun shines upon their face

The Lord blesses them with his loving grace

Submitted on 2009-07-29 14:19:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  so short and yet it packs so much. I like this poem for its simplicity it makes me want to see what else you have written.
| Posted on 2009-07-31 00:00:00 | by ares_nuke_1 | [ Reply to This ]
so cute!
i <3 it.
| Posted on 2009-07-29 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]

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