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    dots Submission Name: engulfeddots
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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       read carefully it makes sense if you think about it. read it a couple of times and you will see what i mean.


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    dotsengulfeddots
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    i want the feel of the rush,
    the burning end of the flame,
    come my love,
    engulf me,
    free me,
    dont let me slip away,
    keep me near you,
    your love,
    forever infinite.




    Submitted on 2009-07-29 14:45:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i really like how i can feel the sensation in your words emotion. good write!!
    | Posted on 2009-07-31 00:00:00 | by BlackBloodDrop | [ Reply to This ]


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