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    dots Submission Name: It's nothingdots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 51
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 947



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    dotsIt's nothingdots
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    its nothing that i did

    its nothing that she said

    its nothing

    its nothing that i want

    its nothing that i need

    its nothing

    its nothing she can give

    its nothing i can take

    its nothing

    its nothing

    its nothing

    its nothing that i like

    its nothing i can show

    its nothing

    its nothing that i feel

    its nothing nothing at all

    but a feeling of dread

    dread, a darkened vision

    a vision, i see

    where nothings the way it's suppossed to be

    to be there for me

    its nothing you want to give

    its nothing

    its nothing

    that's exactly what you say

    its nothing

    its nothing




    Submitted on 2009-07-30 01:14:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Nice..... constant theme...often v/hard to keep consistant and relevant but done well. "some times nothings the coolest hand"...eh? One to relate to on as many levels as the reader cares to delve. If something to the effect of this coment appears, I know that votes post comments too.
    ....now
    | Posted on 2009-07-31 00:00:00 | by SpoonieD | [ Reply to This ]


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