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    dots Submission Name: Rhythmic for your smiledots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1410



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    dotsRhythmic for your smiledots
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    emotions unmoving, my heart only beats for ye

    every silent thought of you, loud like a deafening sigh

    only evidence is the answering of my communique

    that im on your mind as much as you're on mine

    on the right place your touch recoils to my spine

    a shiver thus goosebumps, a chill from you to mine

    a shock, a glance

    a look as though you're guilty of an unpunishable crime

    i'll never prohibit you from those feelings you have

    and give my heart and soul you make them mine

    out past the highest high and the lowest low, you make my heart grow

    so much unexpressed limited by my chords, digits and core

    limited by my given tounge

    i haven't begun to say

    what my soul has to let escape

    stuck inside my words are, so strong, but they don't scar

    so far, but soon as one again, entranced in a condition

    a condition looked down upon by some

    but they don't know what we feel

    for each other it's real, for in this dialog, no true translation exists for this

    skip forward to the next chapter if you do it won't matter

    still this pulse will carry rhythmic for your smile




    Submitted on 2009-07-30 01:28:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very deep, intrigue, very emotional grasp, nice detail, great poem
    | Posted on 2009-07-30 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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