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    dots Submission Name: Envy Perfectiondots
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    Author: Lincesa
    ASL Info:    15/f/The kitchen
    Elite Ratio:    5.78 - 11/9/9
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 46
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1178



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       Wow, well, I found this just recently it was an old poem I did in. . . fifth grade! Let me know what you think of it. :P


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    You stand so beautifully on your own.I envy you,simply for the fact at how perfect you are.

    Invisible to your glorious perfection I sit in silence:blended with the background of what you call as life.
    I scoff,I feel depressed,but welcome the cool feeling of it eagerly.Your laugh is like the soft, and quiet symphony of golden bells.

    Your steps so nimble,I find it hard to believe you're human.Once again,you stand on your own;and I envy you.
    Breath escapes my hollow shell,and you seem to breathe so graciously.You're alive while I'm not.

    I envy you.I'm alone,and you're not.I can't tell if I cry,I can't tell if I'm real:but I seem to be.So invisible to your perfection I feel incompetent.
    As I walk each day,alone,by my shadow's side my mind wanders off to your perfection,and how I envy you.

    The day passes in a blur infront of eye's blinded,like mine, and yet it seems your fun is all over much to fast.
    I glare with cold eye's at the happiness that radiates of your sinfully perfect lips.I'm alone again,but somehow I smile.




    Submitted on 2009-07-30 21:54:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very emotional , it seems like your are reaching out , i like this line" Your laugh is like soft", it speaks out like a voice of calm, very direct, Written very good. Chris
    | Posted on 2009-08-05 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]



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