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    dots Submission Name: HangMandots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    23/M/WA
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 29/75/68
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Spoof/Death
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    dotsHangMandots
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    Won't you please,
    cut me down?
    Rope has grown tight,
    lifted me off the ground.
    Executioner whistles,
    a grisly tune.
    Letter by letter,
    seals my doom.
    I brought misfortune,
    to my peers.
    So here I suffer,
    hung by their tears.
    I'm just a man,
    remember what I sang.
    I'm just a man,
    let me hang.




    Submitted on 2009-07-31 18:08:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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