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    dots Submission Name: Acherontia Styxdots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsAcherontia Styxdots
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    Acherontia Styx

    The ancient river of between
    Nightshades powdered wing gold and purple
    Flutters the dead skull
    In soft velvet wizardry’s cloak

    The eye of the moon caped in cloud
    Traverses the underworld sheet of stars
    With deaths head mark laid upon its back
    On the subtle wings of mysteries code

    Luminescent beauty painted golden dark
    And flight amidst the dividing veil
    Carries in secret the phantom messages
    Of ferryman Charon

    And dreams so mortal of the silent expanse
    Beckon on to the end of life
    Portent and guide
    Rides the shadow in the full moons eye








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      I see flashes of impressive and macabre images derived from a good imagination and a good story refering, of course, to the ancient mythology. I also sometimes use this style of writing when I simply wish to expose my theatrical brainstorms :) I like the way you form your lines with an excellent choice of words. I also always like to use beautiful expressions along with getting the picture across. Great.
    | Posted on 2009-08-02 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]


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