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    dots Submission Name: Your Weakness is Your Strengthdots
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    Author: charmedidentity
    ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.9 - 864/897/406
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       I have so many flaws it's amazing at the amount of things I can find about myself. But it's because of those flaws that I am who I am, and it's because of me being able to work on those flaws that I'm able to show them in the form of a strength


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    dotsYour Weakness is Your Strengthdots
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    In the lowest hour
    Of the darkest day
    In the shadiest alley
    Of the filthiest earth

    Thatís where youíll find me

    In my highest hour
    Of the brightest day
    In the clearest alley
    Of the freshest earth

    Thatís where youíll lead me

    This strength is my guidance
    My recognition from others
    My sole reason of existence;
    This strength is who I am

    Thatís what you see in front of you

    This strength is what you want
    You grab a hold of me like a leech
    And drain all the energy out of me
    Until thereís not chance to breathe

    Thatís what you take out of me

    This strength is all I have to show
    Without it; I have nothing special
    Except for these hidden weaknesses
    Buried underneath the core of my being

    Thatís when I realize what I am

    This weakness is what keeps me alive
    Without it; I am like everyone else
    Too consumed with reaching perfection
    Too afraid to expose where Iím lacking

    Thatís when I find my strength




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