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    dots Submission Name: Let me sleepdots
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    Author: twistedchick
    ASL Info:    18/girlie/utah
    Elite Ratio:    1.59 - 14/57/72
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 99
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    dotsLet me sleepdots
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    it was two years ago
    when you caused me all that pain
    but even though your gone
    you're still here
    haunting me
    in my dreams
    every night i wake up
    screaming and crying
    wanting it to go away
    make it go make it leave
    i'll die to make it go
    let me sleep in peace
    one night without seeing your face
    and how your hands would hit me
    and punish me for things i did wrong
    i didn't mean to do wrong
    i followed your orders
    but you still hurt me....
    so end it today
    two years this day
    end it now
    and let me sleep in peace




    Submitted on 2009-08-03 05:01:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is an interesting peice but i like it
    | Posted on 2009-08-03 00:00:00 | by cha | [ Reply to This ]


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