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    dots Submission Name: Shadow Mandots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsShadow Mandots
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    Shadow Man


    All my faith in anything else
    Has gone

    Jester at your feet
    With the light of my fingers
    Entwined in yours
    You lead me I follow
    One step ahead
    Always one step behind

    I watch your world through shadow cast eyes
    Walking with you
    Standing side by side
    Catching unknown moments
    In the aura sunbeam scatters
    Of your smiles

    Within each and every echo of sorrow
    When the longing of your heart
    Turns inside
    The shades of my comfort
    Hold you close
    And wrap you in the sympathies of my love

    And some day I shall see you
    Blazing angel
    In the vast countries of dancing freedoms
    And there beneath the bright sun crystalline
    I will emerge from within the darkened
    No more to be the shadow man
    And take your hand

    But until then my love
    I am with you
    Shadow in your shadow

    All my faith in anything else
    Has gone





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