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    dots Submission Name: Phobia Of Fairytalesdots
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    Author: newcancer
    ASL Info:    14/Female/Dublin
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 7/8/28
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 36
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 974



    Description:
       Rather random, came out just in a rush. I didn't have to think much about it, thus, it was easy enough, and I did not have to edit much.

    I don't think I'll ever become a great poet, and aiming for being a poet is an empty dream in which I cannot hang on with confidence.
    But I love it. And I love this poem. I am testing out different styles, and I wanted to bring out the taste of a dark setting.

    I hope you all enjoy, and I hope you all find a different meaning to this poem, or that you can only read it, I would love that.
    Thank you ever so much for reading my rantings and my poem <3
    Please tell me if and what I did wrong with this :)


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    dotsPhobia Of Fairytalesdots
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    The ghostly shadows resemble me
    Low in dusk, voice dull with husk,
    with blood shot eyes, within
    them, deadness falls upon.
    Yet, in the shadows I shalt
    not hide.
    For I am not weak, and I
    shall not die.

    My heart is the haunting
    ghost of the past.
    It murders mortal with sorrowful howls.
    In the dead of night, fall upon your knees
    And watch the darkness burn bright
    For I shall always put up
    a fight.

    My being is fully ghostful woe,
    for there is no other place to go.
    Yet I be no fallen angel upon
    this earth.
    And I know too well that this
    dance shall always end.
    I want to know you in the sun,
    to see you smile in light.
    I want to see your anger
    fall from the looming cliffs,
    dead from the fearful heights.




    Submitted on 2009-08-04 16:10:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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