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    dots Submission Name: Good Luckdots

    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsGood Luckdots

    I fuckin despise you
    and all that you say.
    You do nothing but bitch
    the entire day.

    You say that you're godly
    but I'm afraid not!
    You're not all that precious
    despite what you're taught.

    You throw things and argue;
    please tell me what I've done.
    You'll never be pleased,
    you only ruin my fun.

    I dread the very thought
    of coming home each day.
    You've given me limits
    every possible way.

    But once I reach the age
    and I'm considered an adult,
    I'll never have to listen
    to your mouth, your insults.

    I'll be gone before you know it
    and you'll have no one left to boss.
    You'll be your only company
    and it'll be your own loss.

    Good luck hearing from me
    after I hit that door.
    No being abused by you
    any fucking more!

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