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    dots Submission Name: I ask you for a sentimentaldots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsI ask you for a sentimentaldots
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    you give me the lowest low

    and the highest high

    it all feels good and bad but why?

    is it because i'm an emotional guy?

    sometimes i don't even think you try

    you get me pissed and then escapes the loudest sigh

    do you care about you and i?

    i ask you for a sentimental and you just look to the sky

    why are you like that, so cold you make me cry

    what secrets do you hide?

    do i want to know, should i pry?




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