Wrong, amiss, awry by vLame

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Submission Name: Wrong, amiss, awry dots

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Author:	vLame
ASL Info:	21/m/lbc
Elite Ratio:	1.61 - 15/18/50
Words:	51

Class/Type:	Poetry/Depressed
Total Views:	39
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	357

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Wrong, amiss, awry dots

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maybe you're a piece of shit

maybe i should look away before i sty

hmm, it's in my eye!

you're acting wrong, amiss, awry

i know it can't all be perfect

that's impossible nigh

if you're really like this

that knot not to tie

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