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    dots Submission Name: Desire of lust but not of heart and lovedots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 43
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    dotsDesire of lust but not of heart and lovedots
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    when we met i was still depressed and afraid

    then i attacked you with my lips

    then it went from there

    the more we talked

    the less i became the one you wanted

    the more i said, the less you wanted

    why did you ever say sure!

    before that why did we just up and agree?

    sometimes i want to run but

    i don't because i know you mean alot to me

    maybe you could go on without me

    but what about the next one?

    how will it be?

    i just want you to say goodnight, i love you!

    because i love you, dear.

    saying that's nothing you should fear

    especially with all the things we've done for each other

    why do you still if you don't want it to go anywhere?

    you want sex, you want kisses and calls, but you don't want feelings

    tell me if i'm your desire of lust but not of heart and love

    you want to gift me

    launder me in thrills

    want me by your side?

    we talk alot

    think about what we said

    and what i heard

    you want no one else but you don't want me?

    short vacations of a day of fun

    with you by my side, it's never a bore

    sometimes the ride away from you is a chore

    shouldn't i take some love away

    everytime with that two hour ride afar to go see then leave you?




    Submitted on 2009-08-05 04:26:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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