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    dots Submission Name: Rememberdots
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    Author: eagle wing
    ASL Info:    15/m/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 29/34/24
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Story/Death
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    dotsRememberdots
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    There are those who think death should be feared.

    They are fools.

    There are also those who believe that even though they had a full life, or even if they didnt, they die alone.

    They to are fools.

    For death is not something to be feared or something that you should feel alone about.

    It is exactaly the oposite.

    When one, dies there is an impact to those who had any contact with them.

    Weather that contact was great or small, with the young or old, poor or rich, the impact is felt.

    Even though that life one life has ended, the memories continue.

    Memories close, memories far, memories at one time believed forgotten, and even memories that could have been remain.

    Those memories never fade.

    Therefore those who have passed never died.

    and though the conections to them have all but gone new ones are created.

    When those who remeber have come to respect start to remember together...

    something great is created, just what though...

    is up to those who are willing to remember




    Submitted on 2009-08-06 11:17:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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