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    Author: cha
    Elite Ratio:    2.3 - 37/28/31
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I feel my face, I scream with the pain.
    Tears are falling, my hate is the same.
    My words are whispers, my pleas are loud.
    The dark has fallen, I m on the ground.
    I try to remain, my sanity breaks.
    Inside I m dead, I smile I fake.
    I have no end, what will I be.
    No more than nothing, I try to see.
    My hands are raw, I tried too hard.
    My eyes are bleeding, I cry for the start.
    I feel no pity, I have no way.
    I am so empty, words can t say.
    I tear at my skin, I scratch the wall.
    I stare at the mirror, there s nothing at all.




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