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Submission Name:
I Should Go
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Author:
dx10687
ASL Info:
21 / M / IA
Elite Ratio:
2.62 - 13/19/18
Words:
202
Class/Type:
Lyrics/Depressed
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80
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1174
Description:
I Should Go
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Its time to go now
I should go now
Its for the best now
I'm going to go now
Its time for me to go
I don't belong here anymore
Everything looks so different
I don't recognize anything or anyone
Its time to go now
I should go now
Its for the best now
I'm going to go now
I need to get out of here
This is isn't where I belong
And it's finally getting to me
I just need to go
Its time to go now
I should go now
Its for the best now
I'm going to go now
It would be for the best
Cause you don't see me for who I am
I should be with others that see me for who I am
Its for the best for me to go
Its time to go now
I should go now
Its for the best now
I'm going to go now
I have to be gone
I just need to go
There is no going back
This is the end
Its time to go now
I should go now
Its for the best now
I'm going to go now
Submitted on 2009-08-07 17:03:06
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its like the party is trying to convince themselves maybe to not go? like lingering maybe? could be interpreted that different ways...good work
| Posted on 2009-08-09 00:00:00 | by
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the poem seems to be about walking away from a fight and not coming back to it. The only way I think you could make it better is to change up the main rhyme scheme. keep the nows and every other now out and just leave it as go
| Posted on 2009-08-07 00:00:00 | by
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