I'm not a fan of the verses. Very very repetitive and nothing original in them. Very cliché.
However, with that being said i felt complied to write this comment with a huge thumbs up for the chorus. As everyone else pointed out, that censored line is by far and a way a very powerful statement with what you wrote.
I'd change the verses by building on it and not being so repetitive and you'll have the perfect song.
fucking awesome lyrics
but honestly this feels SO incomplete without the music.
maybe it's just because I heard the music first?
idk. it just feels like it's only making a fraction of it's impact in this format,
still. I like this song a lot,
equal parts to music and words <3
Jilted and hated
growth from decay,
pain and pleasure
its ALL The Same!
Wilted and weary
demised from hope?
[censored] these words
and all that I wrote!
"[censored] these words and all that I wrote" very powerful very moving your pissed in this write "duh" lol yet again another amazing write! Although I must admit the repeating got annoying but once I read the "[censored] these words and all that I wrote" it was worth it!!!