Endulged censes
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got music for it, think slipknot meets static-x
Endulged censes
I want it I Need it you got it; CANT HAVE IT! I want it I Need it you got it; CAN'T HAVE IT! I love this I hate this you breathe this; CAN'T TAKE THIS! I love this I hate this you breath this; CAN'T TAKE THIS! Jilted and hated growth from decay, pain and pleasure its ALL The Same! Wilted and weary demised from hope? Fuck these words and all that I wrote! I touch it I Taste it you feel it; GOD HELP ME! I touch it I Taste it you feel it; GOD HELP ME! I see it I Smell it you flaunt it; JUST TAKE ME! I see it I Smell it you flaunt it; JUST TAKE ME! Jilted and hated growth from decay, pain and pleasure its ALL The Same! Wilted and weary demised from hope? Fuck these words and all that I wrote! another tragic lofty curse you see, but don't hear my verse blind and stuttering my last breathe wasted on the dumb and deaf! |
Submitted on 2009-08-07 17:06:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I'm not a fan of the verses. Very very repetitive and nothing original in them. Very cliché. However, with that being said i felt complied to write this comment with a huge thumbs up for the chorus. As everyone else pointed out, that censored line is by far and a way a very powerful statement with what you wrote. Good job. I'd change the verses by building on it and not being so repetitive and you'll have the perfect song. | Posted on 2009-09-21 00:00:00 | by hybridsongwrite | [ Reply to This ] | fucking awesome lyrics | but honestly this feels SO incomplete without the music. maybe it's just because I heard the music first? idk. it just feels like it's only making a fraction of it's impact in this format, still. I like this song a lot, equal parts to music and words <3 + of course, I love you ! <3 | Posted on 2009-09-12 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ] | Jilted and hated | growth from decay, pain and pleasure its ALL The Same! Wilted and weary demised from hope? [censored] these words and all that I wrote! HOLY **** "[censored] these words and all that I wrote" very powerful very moving your pissed in this write "duh" lol yet again another amazing write! Although I must admit the repeating got annoying but once I read the "[censored] these words and all that I wrote" it was worth it!!! Jackz | Posted on 2009-08-15 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ] | |
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