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    dots Submission Name: Unfaithful Betrayaldots
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    Author: MinervaBlu
    ASL Info:    17 nowhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.51 - 287/303/232
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/I hate you
    Total Views: 149
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    dotsUnfaithful Betrayaldots
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    Daggers flying to and fro
    Nasty words crammed on the knife
    Stabbing, hurting, stinging
    But he just doesn't know
    The late nights and white lies
    Wondering, worrying about us
    However did we come to
    Quick kisses and clipped goodbyes?
    We were once consumed in fire
    A love so passionate and true
    Now sizzling in wet ash
    Doused by a sexy, little liar
    Without remorse, without regret
    He comes home to sleep with me
    Stinking of booze and cheap perfume
    I lay next to him, trying to forget
    Where did I go wrong, where?
    I always told him I love him
    The perfect little wife
    Always caring, always there
    His sweet words and dripping deciet
    Make the confrontation die down
    I believe for one moment I'm wrong
    Till we lay naked and never speak
    And I remember how he uses me
    To cook his meals and clean his clothes
    Number one stepford wife
    Never to be loved, never to be free
    Of the chains of the unfaithful
    Of the cheating, lying husband
    Crying, hurting, pining for love
    Living, breathing his betrayal




    Submitted on 2009-08-07 22:26:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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