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Denial


Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
ASL Info:    22/f/PA
Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46 /119 /104
Words: 36
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Denial



The world is black—
Black;
The absence of color—
Like the hue of your soul
When you plunged that sword of denial
Into her chest—
Hope bleeds,
Bleeds, and bleeds,
Until there is no more.




Submitted on 2009-08-09 12:47:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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