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    dots Submission Name: like waves crashing in.dots

    Author: PopRocksRae
    ASL Info:    21/ F/ Heaven
    Elite Ratio:    2.49 - 232/369/355
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 450
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 364

       i just came back from the beach.

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    dotslike waves crashing in.dots

    if we had to start
    why would we end?
    the sound of me crying.
    are like waves crashing in.

    if you had to remeber
    how did we begin?
    my tear soaked face
    looks like waves crashing in.

    tomorrow is coming.
    we will face this again.
    the feeling we felt
    was like waves crashing in.

    Submitted on 2009-08-09 13:06:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey i really like this poem . like waves crashing in... isn't that true.
    | Posted on 2009-08-09 00:00:00 | by concrete_rose | [ Reply to This ]

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