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    dots Submission Name: Evercleardots
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    Author: JD_Heckle
    ASL Info:    19/THE Male/Briarwood
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 46/66/23
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 358
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    Bytes: 1314



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    dotsEvercleardots
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    The Place is here, the time is right
    for JD Heckle to get drunk tonight
    Still Drinkin, shot glass on the table
    Everclear gettin poured, ready and able
    I'll bring the party if you bring the drinks
    just leave out the thunderbird cause that shit stinks
    I only drink everclear, it hits me hard
    Fuckin dirty old fat bitches in the backyard
    my brain is out, when I drink so much
    but I gives no fucks till next morning or such
    I never thought the numbness would feel so good
    you can't feel if you're numb words misunderstood
    Everclear poured out almost every night
    but I'm the only drunk fucker with no liver in sight
    so hold on tight to my seat
    drunk ass JD and he's bringin the heat
    lockin back all the fools who're dissin me
    rulin the southeast side in the state of AZ
    Skillz Heckle may beat me up but that's okay
    I was drunk off everclear I didn't feel shit anyway
    and all his shit stays the same
    while JD Heckle only spits on the game
    Everclear....it couses throughout my veins
    getting rid of insanity and lonely night pains....
    And when I drink I never cry
    holdin on to the bottle until I die.......




    Submitted on 2004-07-19 02:43:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh, this made me teary. I'm guessing it wasn't supposed to, but it did. You sound like you've got some really overwhelming pain inside that you're afraid to face. Who's Skillz Heckle-is that a relative.
    You can't feel when you're numb-words misunderstood: I know what you meant there. I used to drink alot. When I was in my teens I wrote: "The only thing that you can depend on is liquor. It makes life, when it sucks the most, go by so much quicker."- maybe that's pretty cheesy, but it was true in how I felt at the time.
    This may sound stupid- but maybe you need to cry, get it all out, so you don't have to be a slave to the bottle. You may love booze- but booze doesn't care about you, booze has no feelings. Blah, blah, okay, I'll shut up now.
    | Posted on 2005-07-14 00:00:00 | by fo | [ Reply to This ]
      I remember drinking everclear in college. That stuff got me f***** up beyond anything. We used to drive from Ohio to Kentucky to get it. Those days were fun.

    I love the line "fat [censored]es in the backyard". That's a great image. There is an anger behind your words that comes out loud and clear...sounds like everclear numbs it...or I guess obliterates it.
    | Posted on 2004-09-14 00:00:00 | by marysunshine | [ Reply to This ]
      i feel mixed about this. im not too up on drinkin n stuff, partly since im underage but i still felt it was on point, u got ur message across. i really like how u didn't care if u were s%&tfaced. im not too up on too much cursin either(lying). hot stuff. make a demo, PLEASE!
    | Posted on 2004-07-19 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
      This was kind of fun. I can hear it playing loud, party song. That stuff will mess you up though, be careful of that liver damage.

    Everclear. What a oxymoron that it. It should be called Neverclear.

    The piece seemed to take a serious turn at the end and I liked that. It ain't all about fun and games.
    | Posted on 2004-07-19 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]



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