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The Certainty of Man


Author: Rhythmal
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Words: 62
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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The beginning of a thought
part 1 of a series of similarity


The Certainty of Man



We are life without reason
We are time without season
We are the future, the present, the past
What is to come, What is meant to be
We are the soldiers and poets of the new world
We are the creaters and destroyers of peace and war
We are the children of Mother Earth and Father Time
We are Mankind




Submitted on 2009-08-11 00:38:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is very true.
The opening lines have a nice rhythm to them that pervays the rest of the poem.
| Posted on 2009-08-26 00:00:00 | by fictionalfiend | [ Reply to This ]


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