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A Love Possibly

Author: Rhythmal
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Words: 170
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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A Love Possibly

Without life there is no reason to be, without love there is no reason to see
The truth that lies before your very eyes
That We were meant to be
Forever indeed
one and one is two you see Me and you is We you see.
We are Free to be, together in love you and me'
I can see it now my love, so beautiful and true
I can see the Future the Past the Present,
For you I'll open the gates of Akashic Prophesy If only to make You and Me a Reality, in your eyes as they open wide, to take in the truth untold and watch it all unfold,
'Cause baby I can see it, My Love I really mean it
Me and you at the start of a family tree so long we'll see it stretch into Eternity
Patriarch and Matriarch our story stands before us, So let it be shown and let it be known, that the perfect future is one Unknown

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