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    Author: Rhythmal
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    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsSimple Poetrydots
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    Simple poetry, without thought only need
    simple poetry
    let it be, unto me
    indeed
    Perhaps the complexity, of
    rather simple poetry will
    someday, be better known to thee, but
    moreso to be blessed by the light
    so beautifully bright and the shadows
    so deep in the wonderfull night, peaceful indeed
    and beautiful too
    these things to me are true
    Poetry.




    Submitted on 2009-08-11 01:11:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I was in a terrible argument this morning over poetry... my dread of ever being "discovered" in real life as a "poet" (I don't consider myself that, which is what the fight was over)... The Dead Art of Poetry, the Dead-end of Writing Skills, etc. Why we hide things from the people who "love" us and why we open ourselves to others. And how the best way to becoming a poet is to die with your notebooks in your arms. Only then do people take your work "seriously" it seems. "The last words... let's publish this!"

    I love poetry... but it's a guilty pleasure, seemingly sinful in a way. If I felt this way about Dorito's, I'm sure I would be 300 lbs. with tons of empty bags under my bed... but luckily, I just forget to eat some days and only collect notebooks.

    PS: Just an FYI... rabbits eat paper. Never let a rabbit out of its cage to wander free, until you pick up your notebooks first.
    | Posted on 2009-08-30 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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